R + P Post 9: Our script

Whilst I was writing the script I felt that it was important to quickly and accurately portray what type of person that Craig was. For this reason, I felt that it was fitting to have a large majority of the dialogue within the opening as a voice over. This meant the audience could instantly feel more connected to the character as he spoke directly to them, allowing an immediate insight into his mind. This idea was largely influenced by the movie 'Submarine' as I felt that the character of Oliver Tate was impeccably represented through his use of voice overs. An issue that I had whilst writing the script was trying to find a way to condense a character such as Craig into very few words so that the voice over did not distract from the visuals within the opening. This difficulty resulted in many re-drafts of the script with the help of my fellow group members.Below I have included the Treatment for the script.

Since creating this draft I have edited it further in order to create a new and improved final script which I have included below...